(This exercise involved making a list of words 26 words beginning with the letters of the alphabet, a place name, a person's name, and a colour. These are, of course, just ingredients to help you get started. You'll note I added a lot of words and I did not use a person's name, and the place name actually only appears in the title.)
Escape from Oz
You are too open, they will get to you--
the frenzied ululations feeding your self-doubt.
Enormous bendy agression is no match for
conniving divas.
Greed is human,
but your snide jeers are so random,
hiding your hurt.
I lost the key... please
don't be mad.
Persistant fiery tempers--
xeroxes of each other lose quality.
I am iced over -- the red moods cannot break me.
Now what?
All works are the intellectual and artistic of property of Londyn J A Korol (née Barrett). Plagiarism is a crime. "A writer is someone for whom writing is more difficult than it is for other people." I'm muddling my way through this craft and I'm happy to muddle with you. Let's muddle together.
22 mars 2007
21 mars 2007
Monosyllabic
(I'm trying to do a virtual poetry workshop, so after a three month absence, I may post a lot of (possibly really bad) poetry. This exercise's objective was to use only monosyllabic words--yes I know "smile" is two, and several words have more than one mora... but it's close. I don't feel that it has a lot of "rhythm" but is the same disjointed feel as most of what I write. Still, I kind of like it...)
I want to go to France
Air is cool, fresh (I guess this)
Spread the word that
I love Coke [your green eyes]
Smile on the way to Spain
Rain and plains
Glad to be not at home, but here.
Would take a plane to see you.
The feat is nuts, my head aches
Kiss!
I want to go to France
Air is cool, fresh (I guess this)
Spread the word that
I love Coke [your green eyes]
Smile on the way to Spain
Rain and plains
Glad to be not at home, but here.
Would take a plane to see you.
The feat is nuts, my head aches
Kiss!
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