21 mars 2007


(I'm trying to do a virtual poetry workshop, so after a three month absence, I may post a lot of (possibly really bad) poetry. This exercise's objective was to use only monosyllabic words--yes I know "smile" is two, and several words have more than one mora... but it's close. I don't feel that it has a lot of "rhythm" but is the same disjointed feel as most of what I write. Still, I kind of like it...)

I want to go to France
Air is cool, fresh (I guess this)
Spread the word that
I love Coke [your green eyes]
Smile on the way to Spain
          Rain and plains
Glad to be not at home, but here.
Would take a plane to see you.
The feat is nuts, my head aches

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