28 janvier 2018

Opening Lines day 8, a changing of exercises

1
He had thought to brighten her day by finishing the unpacking and arranging, but her expression told him that his thought and execution was poorly received. 

2
She didn't know any of the runners at the high school track meet, but their intensity and expressions of an earnest desire to win made her choke up with an array of emotions. 

3
She gave him everything he could ever want except for her time, and that, of course, was the only thing he truly wanted. 

4
It was 2:17 p.m. and we were all standing on the lawn watching a succession of planes fly overhead towards the smoke. 

5
His favourite shirt was unwearable - the print was worn and was now simply spots of illegible plastic transfer that kept the entire thing from being a mess of a holes - but he diligently washed it once a month and placed it back in his closet as a reminder. 

A changing of exercises
As noted in my last entry, it's surprisingly difficult to go back and review the history of a story that I do not have on hand.  As such, I am going to sift through the book I am using and select a slightly more accessible exercise to pursue for the next week or so. 

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